Comic 001 - Sigh

11th Jan 2013, 5:56 PM in Chapter One
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001 - Sigh
Average Rating: 5 (8 votes)

Author Notes:

rufiangel 11th Jan 2013, 5:56 PM edit delete
rufiangel
I think if I were to redraw this with my current abilities, it'd probably be better fanservice, haha. I guess it's best left as is.
rufiangel 30th Apr 2015, 11:57 PM edit delete
rufiangel
This strip has now been replaced with a redrawn strip, as a part of the Redrawing the First Chapter Campaign!

You may view the original version of the strip here!

EDIT: Just read my original comment on this, AHAHAHA! XD; Did I make it better fanservice? I'll let readers be the judge of that, I suppose! XD;;; (As TheD-Wrek would put it: "HD bazongas.")

Comments:

ranger_brianna_new 30th Jan 2013, 4:20 PM edit delete reply
ranger_brianna_new
If I might offer my advice, I think the main thing this comic would need if you redrew it would be slightly less exposition. :P

A lot of what she's saying could be shown with better art, rather than told.

'Specially since she's presumably talking to herself. I don't know 'bout you, but when I talk to myself, it's typically in short sentences, which're usually quite broken up and incomplete.
rufiangel 2nd Feb 2013, 10:01 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Thanks for the C&C! I'll definitely take that into account when I redraw these pages some day. :)
HeSerpenty 24th Sep 2014, 2:45 AM edit delete reply
HeSerpenty
Ohohoooo startin off witha BATH scene! Smart.......very smart ;D
rufiangel 24th Sep 2014, 10:42 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Ahahaha!! You left comments everywhere you ninja, you! XD;;;

I drew this so long ago I forget exactly what was going through my mind, but probably... didn't want to draw her armour for as long as possible. XD;;;;;; Well, that and fanservice!
Prayformercy 25th Sep 2014, 2:29 AM edit delete reply
Prayformercy
Hurray for fan service!
Matt Knab 27th Dec 2014, 12:19 AM edit delete reply
Matt Knab
healers aren't allowed to take breaks. ;)
TheD-Wrek 27th Jan 2015, 2:02 AM edit delete reply
TheD-Wrek
I'm not complaining about a fan service start. XD
Ltger 16th Apr 2016, 7:13 PM edit delete reply
Ltger
Wow nice fanservice
rufiangel 18th Apr 2016, 4:20 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Why, thank you, Ltger XD; I'm glad you approve?